The article of Baines, L. A.” From tripod to Cosmos: A new metaphor for the language arts” which was published in English Journal, telling about the development of language writing. Instead of asking students to write formal academic response, the initiates such as The Bay Area Writing Project putting more emphasis on the process of writing instructions. First of all, having students to be familiar with different kinds of literary forms is the main program that contemporary teachers train their students. Having students to write various form of writing offer the students the practice of learning how to write for the real audience for different purposes with different point of view.
Besides the training of writing forms, more and more teachers advocate the writing plan of individual conferences which provides students the platform of making sharing with other students. Through these daily classroom activities and writing instructions, students may gradually get acquaintance with the process of how to write.
In addition, instead of the traditional ways of writing in nonprinting media, the use of the computer as the tool of teaching composition has been overall accepted. The increasing computer facilities however offer the language art teachers to guide students how to take advantage of the network resources as the way to write the compositions well.
Indeed, the network offers a great platform for students to search information which might be very useful when we need to make an essay or do some research. Take my experiences for example, I often feel frustrated when I am struggling with my research paper without any inspiration. However, the abundant resources provide me with many references which are conveniently got of rather than the traditional way of searching information such as the books or journals in the libraries.
Turn to the topic of this article, I think the author gives a special metaphor to describe the evolution of language writing from tripod to cosmos. The much more complete establishment of the writing instruction undoubtedly gives the contemporary students the systematic teaching to learn more efficiently and quickly about the writing skills.
Moreover, in the second paragraph, I agree with the viewpoints of the teaching way of making sharing in the daily class activities. By means of discussing and sharing, students may learn more about what the literary forms are, putting these understandings into their composition writing, further elevating the learning effects and decreasing some troubles which come form the misunderstanding of the literary form.
2008年12月5日 星期五
2008年12月2日 星期二
Exam Essay
Summary of question 1
The article of Baines, L. A.“From tripod to Cosmos: A new metaphor for the language arts” which was published in English Journal, talking about the development of language writing.
Instead of asking students to write formal academic response, the initiates as The Bay Area Writing Project, putting more emphasis on the process of writing instructions, having students to write different kinds of style to offer the students the trainings of how to write for real audience.
Recently, more people advocate the writing plan of using individual conferences, giving students to make sharing as parts of the daily classroom activities. Through this writing instruction, students may gradually understand what the literary forms of the writing are, lowering the possibilities of students asking teacher for help. Besides, using the computer as the tool of teaching composition has been overall accepted.
The increasing computer facilities offer the language art teachers to guide students how to take advantage of the network resources as the way to write the compositions well. Moreover, the using of the computer work makes more profits than the nonmedia do.
Response
Undeniably, I like the topic of this article very much. I think the author gives a special metaphor to describe the evolution of language writing from tripod to cosmos. The much more complete establishment of the writing instruction undoubtedly gives the contemporary students the systematic teaching to learn more efficiently and quickly about the writing skills.
In the second paragraph, I agree with the viewpoints of the teaching way of making sharing in the daily class activities. By means of discussing and sharing, students may learn more about what the literary forms are, putting these understandings into their composition writing, further elevating the learning effects and decreasing some troubles which come form the misunderstanding of the literary form.
Moreover, this article also mentions about the use of the computer which has gradually replaced the traditional way of writing in the paper. Indeed, the network offers a great platform for students to searching information which may be very useful in our process of writing. (343 words)
The article of Baines, L. A.“From tripod to Cosmos: A new metaphor for the language arts” which was published in English Journal, talking about the development of language writing.
Instead of asking students to write formal academic response, the initiates as The Bay Area Writing Project, putting more emphasis on the process of writing instructions, having students to write different kinds of style to offer the students the trainings of how to write for real audience.
Recently, more people advocate the writing plan of using individual conferences, giving students to make sharing as parts of the daily classroom activities. Through this writing instruction, students may gradually understand what the literary forms of the writing are, lowering the possibilities of students asking teacher for help. Besides, using the computer as the tool of teaching composition has been overall accepted.
The increasing computer facilities offer the language art teachers to guide students how to take advantage of the network resources as the way to write the compositions well. Moreover, the using of the computer work makes more profits than the nonmedia do.
Response
Undeniably, I like the topic of this article very much. I think the author gives a special metaphor to describe the evolution of language writing from tripod to cosmos. The much more complete establishment of the writing instruction undoubtedly gives the contemporary students the systematic teaching to learn more efficiently and quickly about the writing skills.
In the second paragraph, I agree with the viewpoints of the teaching way of making sharing in the daily class activities. By means of discussing and sharing, students may learn more about what the literary forms are, putting these understandings into their composition writing, further elevating the learning effects and decreasing some troubles which come form the misunderstanding of the literary form.
Moreover, this article also mentions about the use of the computer which has gradually replaced the traditional way of writing in the paper. Indeed, the network offers a great platform for students to searching information which may be very useful in our process of writing. (343 words)
2008年11月26日 星期三
Annotatiom 4- image and self image(digital resourse)
http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=UI5Uy1lWUPQ
The topic of this clip from youtube mainly focused on how to do with self-esteem and its relationship to our feeling about how we look -our general appearances.
The author also agrees that beauty really does matter. In fact, we are living in an ideal world that we would just accept for the way that we are completely unnatural. Therefore, we don’t need to lie to ourselves that the first impression people have of us doesn’t matter at all.
In fact, most people have consciousness that the first impression we leave in other people’s mind is really important. It is a realistic world which beauty and material enjoyment dominated all. The way we look and present out decide what kind of person we are, and sometimes we would be labeled by the definition people gave to us. Therefore, in order to be the focus of the attention and leave a good impression in the public, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration.
~Revised annotation~
Alkistis TV.(2007).Image and self image,from http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=UI5Uy1lWUPQ
The topic of this clip from youtube mainly focused on how to do with self-esteem and its relationship to our feeling about how we look-our general appearances.
The author mentioned that self-esteem has to do with our appearances. Actually, the pursuit of the beauty is a kind of natural instincts. However, the author is not telling us that a better appearance triumphs all. She is not persuading people to pursue the ultimate beauty or magnifying the importance of appearance. Instead, we should be at least conscious of some basis when presenting out in front of the public. First, the general cleanness and the smiles are the basic principles we should learn. The freshness and cleanness of a person would be the bonuses and may leave a good impression on people.
Second, an appropriate dressing is also significant. It doesn’t mean that the glamorous clothes are the best choices. Instead, the clothes should complement your body shape and balance in harmony. Moreover, a good dressing can show you personal style and personality, but be care that- don’t over do it. And don’t fall into the fashion victims.
The author also agrees that beauty really does matter. In fact, we are living in an ideal world that we would just accept for the way that we are completely unnatural. Therefore, we don’t need to lie to ourselves that the first impression people have of us doesn’t matter at all.
Moreover, most people have consciousness that the first impression we leave in other people’s mind is really important. It is a realistic world which beauty and material enjoyment dominated all. The way we look and present decide what kind of person we are, and sometimes we would be labeled by the comments people give to us. Therefore, in order to be the focus of the attention and leave a good impression in the public, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration.
In fact, people indeed have the right to be attractive and pursue beauty looks. However, the most important thing is that we should like our looks and accept the way we are born with.
The topic of this clip from youtube mainly focused on how to do with self-esteem and its relationship to our feeling about how we look -our general appearances.
The author also agrees that beauty really does matter. In fact, we are living in an ideal world that we would just accept for the way that we are completely unnatural. Therefore, we don’t need to lie to ourselves that the first impression people have of us doesn’t matter at all.
In fact, most people have consciousness that the first impression we leave in other people’s mind is really important. It is a realistic world which beauty and material enjoyment dominated all. The way we look and present out decide what kind of person we are, and sometimes we would be labeled by the definition people gave to us. Therefore, in order to be the focus of the attention and leave a good impression in the public, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration.
~Revised annotation~
Alkistis TV.(2007).Image and self image,from http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=UI5Uy1lWUPQ
The topic of this clip from youtube mainly focused on how to do with self-esteem and its relationship to our feeling about how we look-our general appearances.
The author mentioned that self-esteem has to do with our appearances. Actually, the pursuit of the beauty is a kind of natural instincts. However, the author is not telling us that a better appearance triumphs all. She is not persuading people to pursue the ultimate beauty or magnifying the importance of appearance. Instead, we should be at least conscious of some basis when presenting out in front of the public. First, the general cleanness and the smiles are the basic principles we should learn. The freshness and cleanness of a person would be the bonuses and may leave a good impression on people.
Second, an appropriate dressing is also significant. It doesn’t mean that the glamorous clothes are the best choices. Instead, the clothes should complement your body shape and balance in harmony. Moreover, a good dressing can show you personal style and personality, but be care that- don’t over do it. And don’t fall into the fashion victims.
The author also agrees that beauty really does matter. In fact, we are living in an ideal world that we would just accept for the way that we are completely unnatural. Therefore, we don’t need to lie to ourselves that the first impression people have of us doesn’t matter at all.
Moreover, most people have consciousness that the first impression we leave in other people’s mind is really important. It is a realistic world which beauty and material enjoyment dominated all. The way we look and present decide what kind of person we are, and sometimes we would be labeled by the comments people give to us. Therefore, in order to be the focus of the attention and leave a good impression in the public, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration.
In fact, people indeed have the right to be attractive and pursue beauty looks. However, the most important thing is that we should like our looks and accept the way we are born with.
Annotation 3- Be Yourself
Annotation
Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html
As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have.
~Revised annotation~
Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html
Besides the higher acceptance people have toward cosmetic surgery, the cultural surroundings also plays an important factor which affected the social values people have to self-image and the appearance.
As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have. That’s way the cosmetic surgery becomes the trend that people catch up with.
Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html
As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have.
~Revised annotation~
Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html
Besides the higher acceptance people have toward cosmetic surgery, the cultural surroundings also plays an important factor which affected the social values people have to self-image and the appearance.
As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have. That’s way the cosmetic surgery becomes the trend that people catch up with.
Annotation 2- Power of self-image psychology
annotation:
http://www.allbusiness.com/sales/526958-1.html
Power of self-image psychology.
Publication: American Salesman
Date: Thursday, May 1 2003
self reponse
As I had said before, one of the motives why people prefer to do cosmetic surgery is want to improve their outer appearances to be more attractive. But actually, what are the standards of aesthetic? The public ideas and judgments sometimes are the standards which we always identify with and survey ourselves. Besides the public evaluation of the aesthetics, the inner version of how one person looks himself also accounts for some elements we survey the values of ourselves. This called self image. Self image is the mental picture of what we think and look ourselves from our point of views. However, the standards of how we survey ourselves sometimes are under the effects of the social values.
People get more consciousness that the pursuit of the better appearance is much more valued than before. Thus, the images we present in front of the others are important and sometimes are the impressions we leave to the public. To leave a good impression on the others, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration. This phenomenon gradually dominates the social values. We can find that in the modern society, the physical perfection one person pursuits of is basically built up under the high standards of the appearance.
Moreover, as the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to be. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have.
Revised version:
reference
American Salesman.(2003,May 3).Power of self-image psychology[Electronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/sales/526958-1.html
This article puts much emphasis on how self-image affects the attitudes people have toward their lives. In fact, the power of self-image to some extent influences the thoughts of people in an indirect way. For instance, this article concerns that having a good self-image is one of the key elements of having a more positives life. Those who have greater self-images are more confident of presenting in front of the public and sometimes are more willing to take risks. It means that those who are more optimistic about lives have more opportunities of being successful than those who have poor self-images.
The text apparently supports the ideas of how great impact self-image make on human beings. In truth, the good self-image has relation with the development of one person’s mental attitudes which might indirectly lead to different out looks on his lives. In fact, people are more conscious of the importance of the self-image and know well the benefits and advantages they could receive from a better self-image. Therefore, people are trying hard to find ways to improve their appearances to be more attractive.
After all, what are the standards of aesthetics that dominate our ways of looking ourselves? The inner version of how one person looks himself also accounts for some elements we survey the values of ourselves. This called self image. Self image is the mental picture of what we think and look ourselves from our point of views. It’s just like a mirror which reflects the way we present out and gives us the reference to conform with. In the daily lives we may be unconsciously influenced by the images which creepily stores in our minds which called self-schema. The schema is the construction of our images dominates the private sides of our minds.
However, the standards of how we survey ourselves sometimes are also under the influences of the social values mostly. The public ideas and judgments sometimes are the standards which we always identify with.
As the second paragraph mentioned, people get more consciousness that the pursuit of the better appearance is much more valued than before. Thus, the images we present in front of the others are important and sometimes are the impressions we leave to the public. To leave a good impression on the others, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration. This phenomenon gradually dominates the social values. We can find that in the modern society, the physical perfection one person pursuits of is basically built up under the high standards of the appearance.
http://www.allbusiness.com/sales/526958-1.html
Power of self-image psychology.
Publication: American Salesman
Date: Thursday, May 1 2003
self reponse
As I had said before, one of the motives why people prefer to do cosmetic surgery is want to improve their outer appearances to be more attractive. But actually, what are the standards of aesthetic? The public ideas and judgments sometimes are the standards which we always identify with and survey ourselves. Besides the public evaluation of the aesthetics, the inner version of how one person looks himself also accounts for some elements we survey the values of ourselves. This called self image. Self image is the mental picture of what we think and look ourselves from our point of views. However, the standards of how we survey ourselves sometimes are under the effects of the social values.
People get more consciousness that the pursuit of the better appearance is much more valued than before. Thus, the images we present in front of the others are important and sometimes are the impressions we leave to the public. To leave a good impression on the others, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration. This phenomenon gradually dominates the social values. We can find that in the modern society, the physical perfection one person pursuits of is basically built up under the high standards of the appearance.
Moreover, as the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to be. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have.
Revised version:
reference
American Salesman.(2003,May 3).Power of self-image psychology[Electronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/sales/526958-1.html
This article puts much emphasis on how self-image affects the attitudes people have toward their lives. In fact, the power of self-image to some extent influences the thoughts of people in an indirect way. For instance, this article concerns that having a good self-image is one of the key elements of having a more positives life. Those who have greater self-images are more confident of presenting in front of the public and sometimes are more willing to take risks. It means that those who are more optimistic about lives have more opportunities of being successful than those who have poor self-images.
The text apparently supports the ideas of how great impact self-image make on human beings. In truth, the good self-image has relation with the development of one person’s mental attitudes which might indirectly lead to different out looks on his lives. In fact, people are more conscious of the importance of the self-image and know well the benefits and advantages they could receive from a better self-image. Therefore, people are trying hard to find ways to improve their appearances to be more attractive.
After all, what are the standards of aesthetics that dominate our ways of looking ourselves? The inner version of how one person looks himself also accounts for some elements we survey the values of ourselves. This called self image. Self image is the mental picture of what we think and look ourselves from our point of views. It’s just like a mirror which reflects the way we present out and gives us the reference to conform with. In the daily lives we may be unconsciously influenced by the images which creepily stores in our minds which called self-schema. The schema is the construction of our images dominates the private sides of our minds.
However, the standards of how we survey ourselves sometimes are also under the influences of the social values mostly. The public ideas and judgments sometimes are the standards which we always identify with.
As the second paragraph mentioned, people get more consciousness that the pursuit of the better appearance is much more valued than before. Thus, the images we present in front of the others are important and sometimes are the impressions we leave to the public. To leave a good impression on the others, a better appearance is definitely under the consideration. This phenomenon gradually dominates the social values. We can find that in the modern society, the physical perfection one person pursuits of is basically built up under the high standards of the appearance.
2008年11月23日 星期日
Annotation 1- Surgeons Enhance Patients' Self-Image
http://www.allbusiness.com/health-care-social-assistance/ambulatory-health-services/4059428-1.html
By Whittington, Jane
Publication: Greater Lansing Business Monthly
Date: Friday, December 1 2006
This study points out the overall phenomenon of the cosmetic surgery. It also gives the approximate number of the Americans who are taking the surgery. The uprising numbers show that more and more people are choosing plastic surgery as the way to improve their appearances. In the early time when cosmetic surgery is not so popular and acceptable, the only way to make oneself look more beautiful is by cosmetics.
However, as people are getting higher and higher acceptance of cosmetic surgery, they are more apt to think of it as the way to change their appearances which they have seldom thought of before. Thus, the popularity of the cosmetic surgery represents a kind of new trend that people will pursue of. The pursuit of becoming more attractive and having a good mood which was resulted from the change of the appearance is mainly the goals people willing to take cosmetic surgery.
Pursuing the beauty thing is a kind of human nature which is difficult to be eliminated. Having a good look is the dream of everybody’s. We all have desires to see the beautiful image of ourselves in the mirror. By doing the cosmetic surgery, we could attain what we can not attain before. The happiness and confidence which come from the satisfaction of having good-looking are exactly the human nature of making ourselves pleased.
Therefore, the cosmetic surgery at the same time improves one person’s appearance but also enhances the confidence of one person. Making a change of the self-image not only satisfies oneself but changes the way people see him.
~Revised annotation~
Reference
Whittington, Jane.(2006,December 1). Publicized in Greater Lansing Business Monthly [Electronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/health-care-social-assistance/ambulatory-health-services/4059428-1.html
This study points out the overall phenomenon of the cosmetic surgery. It also gives the approximate number of the Americans who are taking the surgery. The uprising numbers show that more and more people are choosing plastic surgery as the way to improve their appearances. In the early time when cosmetic surgery is not so popular and acceptable, the only way to make oneself look more glamorous is by cosmetics. It is not difficult to find that most brands of cosmetic products claim the remarkable effectiveness after use, which appeals lots of beauty-pursuers to try.
However, as people have much higher standards about aesthetic, the make-up products are no longer sufficient for those who want to pursue the quicker way of becoming attractive once and for all. Instead, they are more apt to think of the cosmetics as the way to change their appearances which they have seldom thought of before. Therefore, this phenomenon indirectly contributes to the uprising rate of the patients taking cosmetic surgery every year. The popularity of the cosmetic surgery however represents a kind of new trend and new ideas of this modern time.
Although the pursuit of attractiveness and good identification are the primary reason that promotes people to take cosmetic surgery, it doesn’t mean that those who take surgery are superficial. Actually, pursuing the beauty thing is a kind of human nature which is difficult to be eliminated. Having a good look is the dream of everybody’s. We all have desires to see the beautiful image of ourselves in the mirror. By doing the cosmetic surgery, we could attain what we can not attain before. The happiness and confidence which come from the satisfaction of having good-looking are exactly the human nature of making ourselves pleased.
In conclusion, the cosmetic surgery not only improves one person’s appearance but also enhances the confidence of one person. That’s why more and more people choose this way in order to make a big change.
By Whittington, Jane
Publication: Greater Lansing Business Monthly
Date: Friday, December 1 2006
This study points out the overall phenomenon of the cosmetic surgery. It also gives the approximate number of the Americans who are taking the surgery. The uprising numbers show that more and more people are choosing plastic surgery as the way to improve their appearances. In the early time when cosmetic surgery is not so popular and acceptable, the only way to make oneself look more beautiful is by cosmetics.
However, as people are getting higher and higher acceptance of cosmetic surgery, they are more apt to think of it as the way to change their appearances which they have seldom thought of before. Thus, the popularity of the cosmetic surgery represents a kind of new trend that people will pursue of. The pursuit of becoming more attractive and having a good mood which was resulted from the change of the appearance is mainly the goals people willing to take cosmetic surgery.
Pursuing the beauty thing is a kind of human nature which is difficult to be eliminated. Having a good look is the dream of everybody’s. We all have desires to see the beautiful image of ourselves in the mirror. By doing the cosmetic surgery, we could attain what we can not attain before. The happiness and confidence which come from the satisfaction of having good-looking are exactly the human nature of making ourselves pleased.
Therefore, the cosmetic surgery at the same time improves one person’s appearance but also enhances the confidence of one person. Making a change of the self-image not only satisfies oneself but changes the way people see him.
~Revised annotation~
Reference
Whittington, Jane.(2006,December 1). Publicized in Greater Lansing Business Monthly [Electronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/health-care-social-assistance/ambulatory-health-services/4059428-1.html
This study points out the overall phenomenon of the cosmetic surgery. It also gives the approximate number of the Americans who are taking the surgery. The uprising numbers show that more and more people are choosing plastic surgery as the way to improve their appearances. In the early time when cosmetic surgery is not so popular and acceptable, the only way to make oneself look more glamorous is by cosmetics. It is not difficult to find that most brands of cosmetic products claim the remarkable effectiveness after use, which appeals lots of beauty-pursuers to try.
However, as people have much higher standards about aesthetic, the make-up products are no longer sufficient for those who want to pursue the quicker way of becoming attractive once and for all. Instead, they are more apt to think of the cosmetics as the way to change their appearances which they have seldom thought of before. Therefore, this phenomenon indirectly contributes to the uprising rate of the patients taking cosmetic surgery every year. The popularity of the cosmetic surgery however represents a kind of new trend and new ideas of this modern time.
Although the pursuit of attractiveness and good identification are the primary reason that promotes people to take cosmetic surgery, it doesn’t mean that those who take surgery are superficial. Actually, pursuing the beauty thing is a kind of human nature which is difficult to be eliminated. Having a good look is the dream of everybody’s. We all have desires to see the beautiful image of ourselves in the mirror. By doing the cosmetic surgery, we could attain what we can not attain before. The happiness and confidence which come from the satisfaction of having good-looking are exactly the human nature of making ourselves pleased.
In conclusion, the cosmetic surgery not only improves one person’s appearance but also enhances the confidence of one person. That’s why more and more people choose this way in order to make a big change.
2008年11月13日 星期四
Reflection
At first, I don’t have any idea about the topic of my essay, not to mention to turn in my homework before the deadline. Many of my classmates also gave me many suggestions for reference. It is no doubt that choosing a good topic that combined with one self’s interests is time-consuming. Thus, it manifests the importance of finding a good topic.
After a long time of searching information on the internet and through much consideration about the subject which is appropriate and interesting for me to develop, I find many topics and subjects that are related to the plastic surgery. I think that through the research of this topic, I might get more realized about the emerging culture of the plastic surgery. I think this topic is more interesting and workable than any other essays such as race or sex issues.
To begin with, I make a discussion about the ethical problem of having plastic surgery and the controversial ideas accompany with the surgery. Does having plastic surgery obey the natural laws of creation? Lately, I found that it is really difficult to make more stretch about the ethical aspects. After all, this research involves too many philosophic thinking.
To make my essay more smoothly precede, I try to find another aspect of thinking related to the plastic surgery. At last, I decide to make research about the relationship between the social values and the culture of plastic surgery. The study of social aspect is much more workable and interesting than the topic before.
However, the change of the topic means the reorganization of thinking. Besides overthrown the old thinking, it is also practicable to put some of the original ideas in the new use. But be care of the conflicting ideas which will make contradiction to the new argument.
From the brainstorming of prewriting to the production of an essay, the writer’s blocks are unavoidable. For me, the most difficult problem of my essay writing is how to have a wider thinking about the topic. One of the resolutions to this problem is to explore more about the information and references which might give me more understanding about this topic. In fact, there are still miles of ways before I writing a presentable essay.
After a long time of searching information on the internet and through much consideration about the subject which is appropriate and interesting for me to develop, I find many topics and subjects that are related to the plastic surgery. I think that through the research of this topic, I might get more realized about the emerging culture of the plastic surgery. I think this topic is more interesting and workable than any other essays such as race or sex issues.
To begin with, I make a discussion about the ethical problem of having plastic surgery and the controversial ideas accompany with the surgery. Does having plastic surgery obey the natural laws of creation? Lately, I found that it is really difficult to make more stretch about the ethical aspects. After all, this research involves too many philosophic thinking.
To make my essay more smoothly precede, I try to find another aspect of thinking related to the plastic surgery. At last, I decide to make research about the relationship between the social values and the culture of plastic surgery. The study of social aspect is much more workable and interesting than the topic before.
However, the change of the topic means the reorganization of thinking. Besides overthrown the old thinking, it is also practicable to put some of the original ideas in the new use. But be care of the conflicting ideas which will make contradiction to the new argument.
From the brainstorming of prewriting to the production of an essay, the writer’s blocks are unavoidable. For me, the most difficult problem of my essay writing is how to have a wider thinking about the topic. One of the resolutions to this problem is to explore more about the information and references which might give me more understanding about this topic. In fact, there are still miles of ways before I writing a presentable essay.
2008年10月30日 星期四
Cosmetic surgery-the emerging culture?
The trend of having cosmetic surgery has prevailed over the world and become prosperous recently. It’s not difficult to find that our lives are gradually overwhelmed by the massive images and the commercial advertisement about the reports of cosmetic surgeries. Under the influences of the intense media’s power and the change of social values toward the aesthetic, the plastic surgery is no longer an ordinary surgical operation but an emerging culture which symbolizes the renovation of the traditional values.
Generally, modern people are more conscious of the images they present in front of the public. The judgments and impressions from others always play the key factors which affect the way people survey themselves. We are affected by the opinions of the majority which dominated the orientation of the social values. The public attitudes toward the aesthetic, however, become the standards we fit them to ourselves. In the modern times, people have more high standards about their outer beauty. The pursuit of the good looks satisfies one person’s desire to become more attractive. That is, the emerging culture of having plastic surgery becomes the way to reconstruct a new appearance or compensate for the innate imperfections. Cosmetic surgery offers people the chance to improve people’s outside appearance to be more attractive. Having a more appealing look strengthens one people’s confidence and besides satisfies people’s self-appraisal.
To sum up, the motive for the plastic surgery has transferred from the simple reconstruction of the innate defects to the pursuit of the perfect and gorgeous looks. It is no doubt that this transformation of plastic surgery to some extent reflects the change of the social values toward aesthetic.
reference resources: http://etds.ncl.edu.tw/theabs/index.jsp
http://etds.ncl.edu.tw/theabs/site/sh/detail_result.jsp#
Generally, modern people are more conscious of the images they present in front of the public. The judgments and impressions from others always play the key factors which affect the way people survey themselves. We are affected by the opinions of the majority which dominated the orientation of the social values. The public attitudes toward the aesthetic, however, become the standards we fit them to ourselves. In the modern times, people have more high standards about their outer beauty. The pursuit of the good looks satisfies one person’s desire to become more attractive. That is, the emerging culture of having plastic surgery becomes the way to reconstruct a new appearance or compensate for the innate imperfections. Cosmetic surgery offers people the chance to improve people’s outside appearance to be more attractive. Having a more appealing look strengthens one people’s confidence and besides satisfies people’s self-appraisal.
To sum up, the motive for the plastic surgery has transferred from the simple reconstruction of the innate defects to the pursuit of the perfect and gorgeous looks. It is no doubt that this transformation of plastic surgery to some extent reflects the change of the social values toward aesthetic.
reference resources: http://etds.ncl.edu.tw/theabs/index.jsp
http://etds.ncl.edu.tw/theabs/site/sh/detail_result.jsp#
2008年10月23日 星期四
Film from youtube - digital resourses
http://tw.youtube.com/watch?v=ZS-ALoNaQvA(youtube)
Dr. Marek Dobke, UCSD School of Medicine, explores the latest advances in cosmetic surgery and what we can expect in the future.
"academic plastic surgery"
‧education
‧research
‧clinical service
"cosmetic surgery"
‧evidence based than other areas of medicine and surgery
‧giudlines and approaches may differ depending on patient ethnicity, generation
‧fashion may dictate changes in approaches and techniques
‧advertisement
‧multispecialty / mutiprofessional approach
(aestheticians, cosmetic dentists, dermatologist)
opinions:
The doctor talked a lot about the scientific approach toward the plastic surgery.
But actually this speech rarely mentioned about the effects plastic surgery brings to the attitude toward aesthetic.
Dr. Marek Dobke, UCSD School of Medicine, explores the latest advances in cosmetic surgery and what we can expect in the future.
"academic plastic surgery"
‧education
‧research
‧clinical service
"cosmetic surgery"
‧evidence based than other areas of medicine and surgery
‧giudlines and approaches may differ depending on patient ethnicity, generation
‧fashion may dictate changes in approaches and techniques
‧advertisement
‧multispecialty / mutiprofessional approach
(aestheticians, cosmetic dentists, dermatologist)
opinions:
The doctor talked a lot about the scientific approach toward the plastic surgery.
But actually this speech rarely mentioned about the effects plastic surgery brings to the attitude toward aesthetic.
2008年9月29日 星期一
Does having Plastic surgery a good choice?
The trend of having plastic surgery has been widespread all over the world. It’s not difficult to find that our lives are gradually overwhelmed by the massive images and the commercial advertisement about the reports of plastic surgeries. It’s no doubt that many teenagers are bit by bit under the influences of these offensive and massive media’s power. We can see that the number of teens who choose to have plastic surgery is on the rise. Recently, it has become a controversial issue whether the plastic surgery is violating the natural laws of creation and would bring people some negative effects or not.
There are two opposite attitudes that pulling against each other toward plastic surgery. Plastic surgery is a kind of surgery that contains the change of one person’s outside appearance and the reconstruction of the physical functions. The latter however is most widely accepted as the way to reconstruct one person’s innate defects which may bring some inconveniences in daily life. However, the former reason is the main controversial issue that people have argued about the most. Recently, plastic surgery has becomes a way people improve their outside appearance to be more attractive. Having a more appealing look strengthens people’s confidence and makes them more acceptable by the crowd. Although the right and freedom of pursuing one self’s happiness and good-looking is much acceptable now, it is also disputable that plastic surgery violates the natural laws of creation. In traditional views, the body was the gift endowed by the parents and God. To make changes of our body is disrespectful to our parents. A person should accept what you look like and try to make yourself satisfied with your own nature look without admiring those glamorous beauties. Once you change your native appearance, you will violate the laws of creation and even disrespect of yourself. Besides, plastic surgery may carry with some certain risks and side effects.
These two opposite attitudes toward the plastic surgery are continuously arguing with each other. Does plastic surgery a good choice to human beings? Whether having plastic surgery is a kind of freedom pursuing one self’s happiness or not, we still couldn’t make a clear and definite answer toward it.
There are two opposite attitudes that pulling against each other toward plastic surgery. Plastic surgery is a kind of surgery that contains the change of one person’s outside appearance and the reconstruction of the physical functions. The latter however is most widely accepted as the way to reconstruct one person’s innate defects which may bring some inconveniences in daily life. However, the former reason is the main controversial issue that people have argued about the most. Recently, plastic surgery has becomes a way people improve their outside appearance to be more attractive. Having a more appealing look strengthens people’s confidence and makes them more acceptable by the crowd. Although the right and freedom of pursuing one self’s happiness and good-looking is much acceptable now, it is also disputable that plastic surgery violates the natural laws of creation. In traditional views, the body was the gift endowed by the parents and God. To make changes of our body is disrespectful to our parents. A person should accept what you look like and try to make yourself satisfied with your own nature look without admiring those glamorous beauties. Once you change your native appearance, you will violate the laws of creation and even disrespect of yourself. Besides, plastic surgery may carry with some certain risks and side effects.
These two opposite attitudes toward the plastic surgery are continuously arguing with each other. Does plastic surgery a good choice to human beings? Whether having plastic surgery is a kind of freedom pursuing one self’s happiness or not, we still couldn’t make a clear and definite answer toward it.
Msn peer discussion 1 - first draft
霈絃~ 說: kerker
it's candy 說: 哈 what are we going to discuss?
霈絃~ 說: so shall we discuss in English all in english
it's candy 說: yeah !
Claire 說: Yes
it's candy 說: of course
霈絃~ 說: ok
Sophia 說: what subject are we going to focus on
it's candy 說: ummm...
Claire 說: ......
霈絃~ 說: find some issue that we interest
init's candy 說: just one issue?
霈絃~ 說: or..? more than one
it's candy 說: ok
霈絃~ 說: so we can choose from them
it's candy 說: so...everybody came up with an idea
Claire 說: Can each one have different issue?
Sophia 說: haha
it's candy 說: ??
Sophia 說: yeah
霈絃~ 說: so what we are talking about has to be our own paper
Sophia 說: do you think that i have to change my subject?
it's candy 說: you can keep it i think! just chang the thing that you focus
Sophia 說: but i don't know what am i going to focus on
霈絃~ 說: and find more information
Sophia 說: whithout being attack ...culture ?
it's candy 說: it's ok
Claire 說: I think it's ok for Sophia's subject
Sophia 說: kerker... thanks
it's candy 說: you're welcome! and what about my topic?? the commercial movies?
Sophia 說: i think it's fine too your audience will be the environmental protection people
Claire 說: It's OK
霈絃~ 說: so you want to do the research about commercial movies
it's candy 說: why environmental protection people
Sophia 說: i think you can focus on animals issue
霈絃~ 說: the effects to society..? animal ?
Sophia 說: because they care about people's abandoning animals, haha
it's candy 說: but it's just a little part of the commercial movies
Sophia 說: becase i don't know how to say the exact word
Claire 說: It would be a fine topic,too.
it's candy 說: i mean the animal
Sophia 說: yeah
it's candy 說: which word?
Claire 說: ?
Sophia 說: animal protection group? they will be interested in your topic
it's candy 說: if i mention that the Hollywood movies makers only care about the profit they make? is it alright?
霈絃~ 說: yap
it's candy 說: ok i will think about it !
霈絃~ 說: mostly
Sophia 說: you can mention disney
Claire 說: Is the teacher asking our own thioughts?
it's candy 說: disney???
Sophia 說: pixes? finding nemo
it's candy 說: ok,i will take that
Sophia 說: 101dogs ok, done
it's candy 說: ok what about others?
Claire 說: Me?
Sophia 說: you have to find an issue and also express your own ideas
霈絃~ 說: i don't know
it's candy 說: ok,claire
霈絃~ 說: haha
it's candy 說: claire ,i'm sorry, ha
Claire 說: Is the abortion topic fine to the paper?
it's candy 說: do you agree or disagree ?
Sophia 說: yes
Claire 說: I don't know. Maybe I can choose one side.
Sophia 說: i think you can find a lot of news about this subject
霈絃~ 說: yuo have to claim your ideas whether you support it or not
Sophia 說: yeah
Claire 說: OH! Yeah. Just recollecting those news?
Sophia 說: yes and write down the sources
霈絃~ 說: and use some news to help you strengthen your ideas
it's candy 說: and say that you agree or disagree
Sophia 說: then add some of your opinions
it's candy 說: yap!
Claire 說: Ha~ thanks
Sophia 說: ooodiadia~so now joyce?
it's candy 說: and what about joyce?
Claire 說: Joyce?
Sophia 說: haiii~
霈絃~ 說: what's that ooodiadia~ ok, i see i think i still need some time to decide
it's candy 說: sooo childish!!
Claire 說: It's OK.
it's candy 說: haha
Claire 說: Ha
Sophia 說: why do you attack your classmate
Claire 說: Don't be sad!
it's candy 說: cuz i have to bear it even in the dorm!!
Sophia 說: haha~i think i'll tell your roommate. now,joyce?
Claire 說: Dear Joyce?
it's candy 說: what you have came up with so far???
霈絃~ 說: don't attack me
it's candy 說: you can just share with us
Claire 說: Yeah!
霈絃~ 說: let me think.
it's candy 說: if you don't want to decide now,it's fine
霈絃~ 說: i'm going to explode
it's candy 說: how ? where?
Sophia 說: what about racial descrimination
霈絃~ 說: i think what candy suggests is ok
Sophia 說: so candy ,we had better leave now
it's candy 說: leave? why?
Sophia 說: we sit next to the bomb
霈絃~ 說: but i think it is difficult to connect it with literal research
Claire 說: Ha~You guys are very interesting.
Sophia 說: so how about cosmetic surgery?
霈絃~ 說: haha
Sophia 說: do you think it's a good idea to do the surgery
it's candy 說: i have a question
霈絃~ 說: ?
it's candy 說: do the topics need to be contraversial??
Sophia 說: does it has a conflict against the CHINESE TRADITION?
Claire 說: ?
Sophia 說: yes
Claire 說: yeah
it's candy 說: ok
Claire 說: Humm
霈絃~ 說: i think i really need more time to think about it today
it's candy 說: do you have any ideas??now
霈絃~ 說: i really find some topics that really interest me want to i know that there are many topics that i can choose
it's candy 說: like??? you can share with us , you don't have to decide it now
Claire 說: Share with us!
霈絃~ 說: i'm still thinking about it, okok
it's candy 說: but just share with us don't be shy!!
Sophia 說: share!!!
霈絃~ 說: no problem
it's candy 說: ok
霈絃~ 說: i'm finding some topics now
it's candy 說: i know that
Claire 說: You can do that!
霈絃~ 說: i have some general idea now
霈絃~ 說: maybe i can do some movie research about female
Sophia 說: how about suicide problem
Claire 說: Yeah
Claire 說: It's a fine topic.
霈絃~ 說: suicide problem? yap
Sophia 說: children commit suicide because their parents put too much pressure on them
it's candy 說: on the other hand
it's candy 說: i've read an article about that
Sophia 說: yeah kerker
霈絃~ 說: okok, thank you girls
it's candy 說: nowadays, children take it for granted that everything be done by others and they can't stand any pressure so.... they are called "the straberry "
Sophia 說: or do you want to talk about the rise of the women
霈絃~ 說: just like the idea from our english department magizine?
Claire 說: yes!
Sophia 說: but that will not be an contrvertial problem....
霈絃~ 說: ... so we must find the controvertial issue, don't we
it's candy 說: i have an idea!!
Claire 說: Maybe you can choose one of woman issues
it's candy 說: do u think that nowadays women really get the equality compared with men??? cuz lots of people claim the right! does it succeed ?
Sophia 說: is that really fair now? you can talk about that
it's candy 說: yes
Claire 說: Yeah
霈絃~ 說: yap i think about it
it's candy 說: just a suggesstion
霈絃~ 說: thanks
it's candy 說: u're welcome, haha
it's candy 說: 哈 what are we going to discuss?
霈絃~ 說: so shall we discuss in English all in english
it's candy 說: yeah !
Claire 說: Yes
it's candy 說: of course
霈絃~ 說: ok
Sophia 說: what subject are we going to focus on
it's candy 說: ummm...
Claire 說: ......
霈絃~ 說: find some issue that we interest
init's candy 說: just one issue?
霈絃~ 說: or..? more than one
it's candy 說: ok
霈絃~ 說: so we can choose from them
it's candy 說: so...everybody came up with an idea
Claire 說: Can each one have different issue?
Sophia 說: haha
it's candy 說: ??
Sophia 說: yeah
霈絃~ 說: so what we are talking about has to be our own paper
Sophia 說: do you think that i have to change my subject?
it's candy 說: you can keep it i think! just chang the thing that you focus
Sophia 說: but i don't know what am i going to focus on
霈絃~ 說: and find more information
Sophia 說: whithout being attack ...culture ?
it's candy 說: it's ok
Claire 說: I think it's ok for Sophia's subject
Sophia 說: kerker... thanks
it's candy 說: you're welcome! and what about my topic?? the commercial movies?
Sophia 說: i think it's fine too your audience will be the environmental protection people
Claire 說: It's OK
霈絃~ 說: so you want to do the research about commercial movies
it's candy 說: why environmental protection people
Sophia 說: i think you can focus on animals issue
霈絃~ 說: the effects to society..? animal ?
Sophia 說: because they care about people's abandoning animals, haha
it's candy 說: but it's just a little part of the commercial movies
Sophia 說: becase i don't know how to say the exact word
Claire 說: It would be a fine topic,too.
it's candy 說: i mean the animal
Sophia 說: yeah
it's candy 說: which word?
Claire 說: ?
Sophia 說: animal protection group? they will be interested in your topic
it's candy 說: if i mention that the Hollywood movies makers only care about the profit they make? is it alright?
霈絃~ 說: yap
it's candy 說: ok i will think about it !
霈絃~ 說: mostly
Sophia 說: you can mention disney
Claire 說: Is the teacher asking our own thioughts?
it's candy 說: disney???
Sophia 說: pixes? finding nemo
it's candy 說: ok,i will take that
Sophia 說: 101dogs ok, done
it's candy 說: ok what about others?
Claire 說: Me?
Sophia 說: you have to find an issue and also express your own ideas
霈絃~ 說: i don't know
it's candy 說: ok,claire
霈絃~ 說: haha
it's candy 說: claire ,i'm sorry, ha
Claire 說: Is the abortion topic fine to the paper?
it's candy 說: do you agree or disagree ?
Sophia 說: yes
Claire 說: I don't know. Maybe I can choose one side.
Sophia 說: i think you can find a lot of news about this subject
霈絃~ 說: yuo have to claim your ideas whether you support it or not
Sophia 說: yeah
Claire 說: OH! Yeah. Just recollecting those news?
Sophia 說: yes and write down the sources
霈絃~ 說: and use some news to help you strengthen your ideas
it's candy 說: and say that you agree or disagree
Sophia 說: then add some of your opinions
it's candy 說: yap!
Claire 說: Ha~ thanks
Sophia 說: ooodiadia~so now joyce?
it's candy 說: and what about joyce?
Claire 說: Joyce?
Sophia 說: haiii~
霈絃~ 說: what's that ooodiadia~ ok, i see i think i still need some time to decide
it's candy 說: sooo childish!!
Claire 說: It's OK.
it's candy 說: haha
Claire 說: Ha
Sophia 說: why do you attack your classmate
Claire 說: Don't be sad!
it's candy 說: cuz i have to bear it even in the dorm!!
Sophia 說: haha~i think i'll tell your roommate. now,joyce?
Claire 說: Dear Joyce?
it's candy 說: what you have came up with so far???
霈絃~ 說: don't attack me
it's candy 說: you can just share with us
Claire 說: Yeah!
霈絃~ 說: let me think.
it's candy 說: if you don't want to decide now,it's fine
霈絃~ 說: i'm going to explode
it's candy 說: how ? where?
Sophia 說: what about racial descrimination
霈絃~ 說: i think what candy suggests is ok
Sophia 說: so candy ,we had better leave now
it's candy 說: leave? why?
Sophia 說: we sit next to the bomb
霈絃~ 說: but i think it is difficult to connect it with literal research
Claire 說: Ha~You guys are very interesting.
Sophia 說: so how about cosmetic surgery?
霈絃~ 說: haha
Sophia 說: do you think it's a good idea to do the surgery
it's candy 說: i have a question
霈絃~ 說: ?
it's candy 說: do the topics need to be contraversial??
Sophia 說: does it has a conflict against the CHINESE TRADITION?
Claire 說: ?
Sophia 說: yes
Claire 說: yeah
it's candy 說: ok
Claire 說: Humm
霈絃~ 說: i think i really need more time to think about it today
it's candy 說: do you have any ideas??now
霈絃~ 說: i really find some topics that really interest me want to i know that there are many topics that i can choose
it's candy 說: like??? you can share with us , you don't have to decide it now
Claire 說: Share with us!
霈絃~ 說: i'm still thinking about it, okok
it's candy 說: but just share with us don't be shy!!
Sophia 說: share!!!
霈絃~ 說: no problem
it's candy 說: ok
霈絃~ 說: i'm finding some topics now
it's candy 說: i know that
Claire 說: You can do that!
霈絃~ 說: i have some general idea now
霈絃~ 說: maybe i can do some movie research about female
Sophia 說: how about suicide problem
Claire 說: Yeah
Claire 說: It's a fine topic.
霈絃~ 說: suicide problem? yap
Sophia 說: children commit suicide because their parents put too much pressure on them
it's candy 說: on the other hand
it's candy 說: i've read an article about that
Sophia 說: yeah kerker
霈絃~ 說: okok, thank you girls
it's candy 說: nowadays, children take it for granted that everything be done by others and they can't stand any pressure so.... they are called "the straberry "
Sophia 說: or do you want to talk about the rise of the women
霈絃~ 說: just like the idea from our english department magizine?
Claire 說: yes!
Sophia 說: but that will not be an contrvertial problem....
霈絃~ 說: ... so we must find the controvertial issue, don't we
it's candy 說: i have an idea!!
Claire 說: Maybe you can choose one of woman issues
it's candy 說: do u think that nowadays women really get the equality compared with men??? cuz lots of people claim the right! does it succeed ?
Sophia 說: is that really fair now? you can talk about that
it's candy 說: yes
Claire 說: Yeah
霈絃~ 說: yap i think about it
it's candy 說: just a suggesstion
霈絃~ 說: thanks
it's candy 說: u're welcome, haha
2008年1月7日 星期一
assignment 4
assignment4
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/11/27/health/27brod.html?em&ex=1196744400&en=e8456e898a266cdc&ei=5087%0A
霈絃~ 說:so let's start
candy 說:ok
Sophia 說:fine
霈絃~ 說:how do you think about the news?霈絃~ 說:i was shocked when i first saw this newscandy 說:i think the thing also happens in Taiwansumerie@hotmail.com 說:well, why not first talk about the article?霈絃~ 說:it' amazing that suicide also among elderscandy 說:amazing?!Sophia 說:yeah, women tend to express their feelings more than men.candy 說:why do you think its amazing?霈絃~ 說:i think it is shockingsumerie@hotmail.com 說:uhh...atonished?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:wrong use of expression I bet..Sophia 說:yeahSophia 說:let's forgive her.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:"Suicide is more common among older Americans than any other age group."candy 說:hahasumerie@hotmail.com 說:lets keep on goingcandy 說:oksumerie@hotmail.com 說: well, I think we all are surprised by the idea.霈絃~ 說:so what are the reasons causing this phenomenon?Sophia 說:yeah, it's a new idea for me.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:because we usually thought teenagers have bigger percent of suicide rate.candy 說: I think it's because they don't know how to deal with their feelingSophia 說: u're rightcandy 說:so they tend to colse their minds霈絃~ 說:another important reason is social isolationsumerie@hotmail.com 說:According to the paragraph there are some more reasons canSophia tell us some too?霈絃~ 說:it increase the risk of having depressionSophia 說:"Primary care practitioners are also crucial to suicide prevention among the elderly because older people, and especially older men, are unlikely to seek out and accept mental health services but are often seen by family doctors and nurses within days or weeks of a suicide."sumerie@hotmail.com 說:Qoutation?candy 說:it's ironicalsumerie@hotmail.com 說:Uhh...Sophia 說:what do you mean irnicalSophia 說:ironical霈絃~ 說:ironical?霈絃~ 說:hahasumerie@hotmail.com 說:explain for us Sophiacandy 說:because they just saw doctors, and then it was no use霈絃~ 說:so why they wasted their time to do some useless things?candy 說:they finally committed sucidecandy 說:because they try to grab somethingSophia 說:i think that isolation is the main cost.Sophia 說:because everyone needs love霈絃~ 說:but found that it is helpless for themsumerie@hotmail.com 說:umm....I understandsumerie@hotmail.com 說:let me help and organize your thoughts.Sophia 說:ok霈絃~ 說:don’t know how to fill in the hours and maintain a sense of usefulness when they stop working霈絃~ 說:errorsumerie@hotmail.com 說:Candy means that the one who commit suicide went to the doctor to sezie a chance to live.candy 說:yessumerie@hotmail.com 說:however, at last they still can not live on because the obstacle of emotion isolation overwhelmed them. am I right?candy 說:you're rightsumerie@hotmail.com 說:XDsumerie@hotmail.com 說: okok then lets talk about how to prevent suicide.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:In the paragraph , the author gave us some points to pay attention on.candy 說:I think people who want to suicide will first try to spread the feeling of depression Sophia 說:i think that expressing one's thought is really important.candy 說:yeahSophia 說:this is a way to release one's stress.霈絃~ 說:maybe they can try to get out of the depression by walking out and talking to friends霈絃~ 說:they're too lonelySophia 說:and people should keep contact with friends.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:so listeners should be sensitive ...Sophia 說:by doing so, they can prevent the feeling of loneliness.Sophia 說:yeah.霈絃~ 說:yah霈絃~ 說:and they should enjoy their lifesumerie@hotmail.com 說:nice opinion~Sophia 說:therefore, the physician plays an important role, huh霈絃~ 說:enjoy the good time with people so that they may not feel isolatedcandy 說:and I think the government should take responsibilitySophia 說:?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:goverment?霈絃~ 說:?Sophia 說:whySophia 說:can you give us a more specific statement?霈絃~ 說:hahacandy 說:yescandy 說:for examplesumerie@hotmail.com 說:Maybe,you mean...the society is unhappy?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:in an unhappy satistic?candy 說:the government can advocate how to plan the life after they retireSophia 說:yeahSophia 說:it makes sense nowsumerie@hotmail.com 說:agreeSophia 說:i can understand you now霈絃~ 說:so that's what most of the government want to docandy 說:and encourage them to attend more activitySophia 說:this makes me think of a song.Sophia 說:"lonely"candy 說:such as folklore dancingsumerie@hotmail.com 說:....nonsensesumerie@hotmail.com 說:I mean Sophia...candy 說:and singing old songscandy 說:I know~candy 說:hahaSophia 說:you know that's my previous assignmentSophia 說:i don't think its nonsense!Sophia 說:it's quite an important issue.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:well, I think you mean the government need to spend more time and money on welfare works霈絃~ 說:yahcandy 說:especially for old peoplesumerie@hotmail.com 說:yup!sumerie@hotmail.com 說:So , any other ideas?霈絃~ 說:and family also plays a crucial roleSophia 說:to sum up, isolation is the main cause fo the issue.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:yesSophia 說:only by having the welfare system, and perhaps some love from other people can help decrease the problem.candy 說:agree霈絃~ 說:they need to pay more attention on their family members and gives some encourage to the olders霈絃~ 說:sosumerie@hotmail.com 說:care more about others not only help them, but can express yourself too!sumerie@hotmail.com 說:OK~Sophia 說: that's all for tonightcandy 說:okSophia 說:bye~candy 說:thankssumerie@hotmail.com 說:see yaSophia 說:see oyou next time.candy 說:bye~~霈絃~ 說:ok, it's time to go霈絃~ 說:waitcandy 說:what霈絃~ 說:i feel so lonely nowsumerie@hotmail.com 說:= =
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/11/27/health/27brod.html?em&ex=1196744400&en=e8456e898a266cdc&ei=5087%0A
霈絃~ 說:so let's start
candy 說:ok
Sophia 說:fine
霈絃~ 說:how do you think about the news?霈絃~ 說:i was shocked when i first saw this newscandy 說:i think the thing also happens in Taiwansumerie@hotmail.com 說:well, why not first talk about the article?霈絃~ 說:it' amazing that suicide also among elderscandy 說:amazing?!Sophia 說:yeah, women tend to express their feelings more than men.candy 說:why do you think its amazing?霈絃~ 說:i think it is shockingsumerie@hotmail.com 說:uhh...atonished?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:wrong use of expression I bet..Sophia 說:yeahSophia 說:let's forgive her.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:"Suicide is more common among older Americans than any other age group."candy 說:hahasumerie@hotmail.com 說:lets keep on goingcandy 說:oksumerie@hotmail.com 說: well, I think we all are surprised by the idea.霈絃~ 說:so what are the reasons causing this phenomenon?Sophia 說:yeah, it's a new idea for me.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:because we usually thought teenagers have bigger percent of suicide rate.candy 說: I think it's because they don't know how to deal with their feelingSophia 說: u're rightcandy 說:so they tend to colse their minds霈絃~ 說:another important reason is social isolationsumerie@hotmail.com 說:According to the paragraph there are some more reasons canSophia tell us some too?霈絃~ 說:it increase the risk of having depressionSophia 說:"Primary care practitioners are also crucial to suicide prevention among the elderly because older people, and especially older men, are unlikely to seek out and accept mental health services but are often seen by family doctors and nurses within days or weeks of a suicide."sumerie@hotmail.com 說:Qoutation?candy 說:it's ironicalsumerie@hotmail.com 說:Uhh...Sophia 說:what do you mean irnicalSophia 說:ironical霈絃~ 說:ironical?霈絃~ 說:hahasumerie@hotmail.com 說:explain for us Sophiacandy 說:because they just saw doctors, and then it was no use霈絃~ 說:so why they wasted their time to do some useless things?candy 說:they finally committed sucidecandy 說:because they try to grab somethingSophia 說:i think that isolation is the main cost.Sophia 說:because everyone needs love霈絃~ 說:but found that it is helpless for themsumerie@hotmail.com 說:umm....I understandsumerie@hotmail.com 說:let me help and organize your thoughts.Sophia 說:ok霈絃~ 說:don’t know how to fill in the hours and maintain a sense of usefulness when they stop working霈絃~ 說:errorsumerie@hotmail.com 說:Candy means that the one who commit suicide went to the doctor to sezie a chance to live.candy 說:yessumerie@hotmail.com 說:however, at last they still can not live on because the obstacle of emotion isolation overwhelmed them. am I right?candy 說:you're rightsumerie@hotmail.com 說:XDsumerie@hotmail.com 說: okok then lets talk about how to prevent suicide.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:In the paragraph , the author gave us some points to pay attention on.candy 說:I think people who want to suicide will first try to spread the feeling of depression Sophia 說:i think that expressing one's thought is really important.candy 說:yeahSophia 說:this is a way to release one's stress.霈絃~ 說:maybe they can try to get out of the depression by walking out and talking to friends霈絃~ 說:they're too lonelySophia 說:and people should keep contact with friends.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:so listeners should be sensitive ...Sophia 說:by doing so, they can prevent the feeling of loneliness.Sophia 說:yeah.霈絃~ 說:yah霈絃~ 說:and they should enjoy their lifesumerie@hotmail.com 說:nice opinion~Sophia 說:therefore, the physician plays an important role, huh霈絃~ 說:enjoy the good time with people so that they may not feel isolatedcandy 說:and I think the government should take responsibilitySophia 說:?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:goverment?霈絃~ 說:?Sophia 說:whySophia 說:can you give us a more specific statement?霈絃~ 說:hahacandy 說:yescandy 說:for examplesumerie@hotmail.com 說:Maybe,you mean...the society is unhappy?sumerie@hotmail.com 說:in an unhappy satistic?candy 說:the government can advocate how to plan the life after they retireSophia 說:yeahSophia 說:it makes sense nowsumerie@hotmail.com 說:agreeSophia 說:i can understand you now霈絃~ 說:so that's what most of the government want to docandy 說:and encourage them to attend more activitySophia 說:this makes me think of a song.Sophia 說:"lonely"candy 說:such as folklore dancingsumerie@hotmail.com 說:....nonsensesumerie@hotmail.com 說:I mean Sophia...candy 說:and singing old songscandy 說:I know~candy 說:hahaSophia 說:you know that's my previous assignmentSophia 說:i don't think its nonsense!Sophia 說:it's quite an important issue.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:well, I think you mean the government need to spend more time and money on welfare works霈絃~ 說:yahcandy 說:especially for old peoplesumerie@hotmail.com 說:yup!sumerie@hotmail.com 說:So , any other ideas?霈絃~ 說:and family also plays a crucial roleSophia 說:to sum up, isolation is the main cause fo the issue.sumerie@hotmail.com 說:yesSophia 說:only by having the welfare system, and perhaps some love from other people can help decrease the problem.candy 說:agree霈絃~ 說:they need to pay more attention on their family members and gives some encourage to the olders霈絃~ 說:sosumerie@hotmail.com 說:care more about others not only help them, but can express yourself too!sumerie@hotmail.com 說:OK~Sophia 說: that's all for tonightcandy 說:okSophia 說:bye~candy 說:thankssumerie@hotmail.com 說:see yaSophia 說:see oyou next time.candy 說:bye~~霈絃~ 說:ok, it's time to go霈絃~ 說:waitcandy 說:what霈絃~ 說:i feel so lonely nowsumerie@hotmail.com 說:= =
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