2008年11月26日 星期三

Annotation 3- Be Yourself

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Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html

As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.
However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have.

~Revised annotation~

Nicole Porter.(2006,September 8).Be Yourself.[Eletronic version], from http://www.allbusiness.com/services/amusement-recreation-services/4574935-1.html

Besides the higher acceptance people have toward cosmetic surgery, the cultural surroundings also plays an important factor which affected the social values people have to self-image and the appearance.

As the massive images of the celebrities and advertisements overwhelm the lives of the modern people, people are gradually influenced by these images and the ideas they publicize. The beauty and the fabulous features of those famous celebrities and idols are the patterns we would like to imitate. Having a gorgeous look as the famous stars is the dream of everybody.

However, the appearance of a person is born with that we can not change. Nevertheless, the medical technology of cosmetic surgery becomes the way people could improve their looks they expect to have. That’s way the cosmetic surgery becomes the trend that people catch up with.

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sope2010 提到...

I think that you could put brief statement of the original article and also add some of your opinion at the end. That would be cool.